Seeking comments and criticisms

[ddickey]

5. A quick response

First, thank you. This really does mean a lot to me.

I took your advice and added some in-line links. I think I can--and should--add a few more, but I'm pressed for time this morning, but I'll get to it later. I also took your advice and removed mention of Obama and Clinton.

I haven't had an opportunity yet to go through and weed out some of the tangential threads, though I completely understand what you mean. When I'm writing, I have the tendency to ramble on, and I have been trying to limit or to curb those tendencies.

I do deeply appreciate your comments and guidance and I didn't construe anything you said as insulting. Again, this means a lot to me. Would you mind if I harassed you every now and then, really just to pick your brain if I'm uncertain about something?

Again, thanks!